All Comments on 'A Redheaded Tomboy and Gucci Girl'

Your few month hiatus had me wondering. Nice to see you back, though this piece left a bit to be desired — just a bit but enough to detract from your normal scathing intensity. The dance scene perfectly you, but the interruptions to offer some background distracting/detracting and the uninvited anal sex (rape by any other name) detracted from erotic tension you created between Lacy and Cheri (though Cheri clearly enjoyed the experience).

A very disappointing ending to chapter. You left many unanswered questions. Did Lucy setup Cheri for anal Sex? What year was this in college for Cheri? Freshman/ Sophomore? Did Lucy stay her roommate? Need further chapters.

Not sure if I should have liked this story as much as I did. The heroine was being raped, wasn't she?

Very nicely written. You drew the encounter well. Very sexy.