by maglass
Ugh, all those memories of unwanted pursuit by rejected, but persistent men, came back to me! Imagine having to plot how to undermine your husband every waking second of the day! Then again, how many girls will ever have the adventure of sabotaging a naval ship. Great story and thank you!
I like the idea of the fic, but some of the dialogue felt a bit too modern and so much baby talk took me out of it.
- ANON101
Oh wow, loved the detail, loved the pace(wasn't too drawn out, or too quick to get to the steamy bits).
I know the 'baby talk' isn't for everyone(absolutely no hate at the autonomous comment) but I personally loved it, as someone with a breeding kink I feel like some authors go so hard with it that it becomes cringey, Which makes it really hard to find good stories in that vien but yours was perfect.
PLEASE continue!🖤
i loved it!!! really hot and well-written. would love to see more from you!
I’d love to see him deal with the aftermath. Did he ever wonder how it would feel for his wife to despise him?
Force stories are hot. Please continue! Her husband should bring in another man and force both of their cocks into her tight pussy at the same time. OMG.
Agreed with the comment below! Would love to read another chapter of this story. Even one page would do about her pregnant belly and him being all hits for her 🥵
for anyone who has commented or anyone reading this: I do have two follow up chapters in the works! I don't know when I'll finish them/upload them, and this is still a standalone (it won't be a story), but for anyone wondering or asking for more, I will have some one day :]