by gobula
While this is humorous, it's not as good as the original ending that I read on literotica a while back where Derek gets framed by Josie, and Derek's wife leaves him, taking everything, and he loses his job, and I think he goes to jail.
What happened to that ending? This one is pointless.
however, I loved it, I thought it turned out GREAT though I admit it was light, and a different ending than I had put forth in the previous story but life is like that, things change. If I could change it, I wouldn't. I think this gives more of a "Choose yourself" how it will end up, ending- and that is always better, I think. But I apologies if I let you down, that certainly was not my intent.
-GO BULA!
Great story man. Your sex scenes are very hot (though I wish you wrote more about the gut wrenching pleasure of a prostate pounding), but what I think is even more important is your imaginative scenario and the characters. It is setup like this that makes the fuck scenes a lot more satisfying.
Keep up the good work and I hope you write more stories like this one.
YOUR CHARACTER WAS ALREADY A FAGGOT HIDING AS A HETERO. BBC IS WHAT ALL THE WHITE BETA FAGS NEED___RIGHT!!! 😎🖕🧚♂️BOY.