All Comments on 'A Revenge Fuck Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
ha ha ha

thats a good revengef*ck ha ha on "bofe"

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

MORE!! There needs to be more! I'm lovin this story line!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not as good.........

While this is humorous, it's not as good as the original ending that I read on literotica a while back where Derek gets framed by Josie, and Derek's wife leaves him, taking everything, and he loses his job, and I think he goes to jail.

What happened to that ending? This one is pointless.

gobulagobulaover 16 years agoAuthor
All apologies

however, I loved it, I thought it turned out GREAT though I admit it was light, and a different ending than I had put forth in the previous story but life is like that, things change. If I could change it, I wouldn't. I think this gives more of a "Choose yourself" how it will end up, ending- and that is always better, I think. But I apologies if I let you down, that certainly was not my intent.

-GO BULA!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fucking awesome

Great story man. Your sex scenes are very hot (though I wish you wrote more about the gut wrenching pleasure of a prostate pounding), but what I think is even more important is your imaginative scenario and the characters. It is setup like this that makes the fuck scenes a lot more satisfying.

Keep up the good work and I hope you write more stories like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
WOw

YOUR CHARACTER WAS ALREADY A FAGGOT HIDING AS A HETERO. BBC IS WHAT ALL THE WHITE BETA FAGS NEED___RIGHT!!! 😎🖕🧚‍♂️BOY.

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