by gobula
I have to say the story was good till it got to page 5. I really wanted to see Josie get that jerk back and it turns around on Josie???? What's up with that? I can't stand arrogant people like that Darren that think the whole world is their oyster. I want to see Josie get him back, not become his servant, please salvage this story so Josie wins and Darren loses everything he has!
you try not to do something and you do it, damm what a pisser!