All Comments on 'A Reversal of Fortune'

This needs so much a part 2 with son breeding her!

WHAT HAPPENED TO THSI STORY WAS SUPPOSED TO BE ABOUT INCEST BUT ALL YOU WROTE ABOUT WAS THE RAPE OF HIS MOTHER BY A FRIEND OF HER FATHER ?????

YOU NEVER TOLD THE STORY ABOUT THE MOTHER AND SON..................

ARE YOU GOING TO TELL THAT STORY OR WHAT?????

What the hell...why wasn't this story labeled part 1?

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Not an incest story. You need to FTDS before you submit it!

It is very seldom that I rate a story as a Five ( 5 ).

You write well and offer a female perspective that EVERY YOUNG MAN SHOULD READ !

So many young women get a wham bam forgot to say thank you introduction to sex.

This, is a recommended read.

OKaaay! Minor tri-muff occurring here not only with a misdirected title and category miscorrelation but then with the story repeated - thinking this author must be having a bad day!

Still, the opening paragraph did begin with a potentially inferred incestuous scene that alas, never eventuated. But! We did, for reasons unknown, get a full exposé on his mother's unfortunate delving into unprotected sex.

Methinks, someone slipped out of the wrong side of their bed.

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This is really a rape story, the guy should be put in jail. No means "NO"