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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I hope you have more chapters to follow!!!

toastywarm01toastywarm018 months ago

Interesting turn if events! I thought this story would be the mirror image of “The Crush” But it turned out to be quite similar. The guy always loses!

I feel like I have learned a lot about this author after reading his two stories!

Frankdrudge2Frankdrudge28 months agoAuthor

I view the guy as winning in both cases. Just depends on ones point of view I guess :)

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I like the story but , why did her name change to Jessica for a few paragraphs??

Frankdrudge2Frankdrudge28 months agoAuthor

Good point. I was an oversight in I changed to Donna but missed in a few places. I caught that myself recently, and have submitted a corrected edit a week ago and waiting for it to be published. I apologize for the sloppiness.

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