All Comments on 'A Ride from my Friend's Son'

I have read this before, and they did a better job. Maybe you just wrote what you remembered, but the idea and storyline is copied.

other people complaining that it's a worn out storyline well obviously and it's a Favorites so people are going to keep writing about that. Duh.

Not bad, but a couple POV typos and more physical description is needed.

Nathan is 6 foor 2, broad shoulders, well muscled from sports? Give this mature and muscular kid some chest hair for his manly chest! Dark brown chest hair -- what a sexy sight on a high school senior sex machine!