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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
To short

Way to short with little action. If you are going to fill with fluff please make some action somewhere. A finger hardly qualifies

persephonettepersephonetteover 5 years agoAuthor

Still getting used to how long I should make my chapters. More smut will be coming shortly!

maddictmaddictabout 3 years ago

Jack, do us proud young man.

Lady Evelyn, this is an average size chapter. With some coaxing your chapters and Jack can achieve a satisfying size.

CornixCornixover 2 years ago

Preference on chapter length is subjective. Personally I prefer short chapters but I can see why others like longer ones.

There is genuine eroticism to the story, okay was there male oriented porn like fucking? No, of course not. However there was power, control and the start of a new dynamic forced upon them both. Sure Her Dominance will blossom.

I love your stories so far, thank you.

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Domme and writer in my late 20s. Back on my writing game, looking to write exciting femdom stories that make losers get hard in their chastity cages. If you like my work and feel inclined, I accept tips on: https://www.wishtender.com/persephonette

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