All Comments on 'A Ring Named Ezzie Pt. 02'

I love this story the chapters are a good legth hate just 1 or 2 pages keep up the great work

You have done good, although I hope you won't Involve the parents to much.

As for your request, if possible no less than two pages.

Another awesome job. Loving the detail with it going on and on. Keep up great work!

Great job. Love the detail in the story and it's not detail that becomes boring either.

I can't wait for the next Chapter! You make the chapters as long as you like. I will continue to read them

Brilliant story - I cant wait for part 3!

Great story, looking forward to the next chapter. I like the way your weaving Ezzie into the story just the right amount.

Personally I prefer shorter chapters, generally no more than 3 pages. Normally I avoid stories with long chapters but the first few pages of this one hooked me. I read a few pages and note where I'm stopping at then pick it up again when I'm able. There is no one size fits most answers for this, continue how your doing it.

It was going great, but if you’re going to pimp her out to the fathers and other family members, then you’ve lost me. He can get a threesome with friends without sharing her with other men. Not to mention he’s cheating on her and lying to her about the parents and Barbara. He’s lost whatever moral compass he may have once had, and he’s totally disrespecting a woman who really loves him while he clearly doesn’t know the meaning of the word. 2*

I like long stories so don't hold back.

I don´t like Ben to always drink and drive. No good example!

Another series that starts good and goes to cuckland. What is in the water that these authors drink?

This has been a really great story loved it all the way through at first I thought Essie was going to trap him in and thank for what you did for ezzi I'm scared for them both with the cheating

Ben was a hero in my mind until he visited his home and overcame the three Moms. I stopped reading the story there. What a disappointment.