All Comments on 'A Ring Named Ezzie Pt. 09'

by ao1701e

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tzzzrtzzzrover 2 years ago

Wow, great story. Intended to read it in parts but couldn't stop. I can see a few directions for this to go, keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Still loving it all.

SirKevinSirKevinover 2 years ago

I don't mind him mind controlling the others, but it does bother me that he has Ezzie alter Karen's BDSM experience. BDSM is about exploration of consent, and Karen doesn't have it. I like him lessening her inhibitions, though. A good Dom can do this without a ring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Cant wait for the next part. This is a fun story to follow.

crankenheimercrankenheimerover 2 years ago

great story, can't for the next part

golasgilgolasgilabout 2 years ago

If I'm honest I'm disappointed that the story has taken a back seat to constant sex. The mix in the early chapters felt much better to me.

tinfoilhattinfoilhat6 months ago

I love the stories that are really long. You can really get into the characters. I hope that Cat turns into a regular in the rest of the story.

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