by ao1701e
Wow, great story. Intended to read it in parts but couldn't stop. I can see a few directions for this to go, keep up the good work!
I don't mind him mind controlling the others, but it does bother me that he has Ezzie alter Karen's BDSM experience. BDSM is about exploration of consent, and Karen doesn't have it. I like him lessening her inhibitions, though. A good Dom can do this without a ring.
If I'm honest I'm disappointed that the story has taken a back seat to constant sex. The mix in the early chapters felt much better to me.
I love the stories that are really long. You can really get into the characters. I hope that Cat turns into a regular in the rest of the story.