All Comments on 'A Ring Named Ezzie Pt. 11'

It looks like someone’s restraint is slipping. By doing Trish I believe he went against what was decided between himself and his fiancé. I might be mistaken but I could swear that was the wording of their agreement regarding doing something with others. I also would have thought that Ezzie would have stepped in or at the least, given a warning like last time. Let’s see how this goes since it seems everyone is going off the rails at least slightly.

Have to admit this isn't my favorite chapter in the story, but I'm OK with that. I think there was just a little too much going on for the intimacy which has been the strength of your writing. That's OK, I'm more than ready for the next chapter.