All Comments on 'A Ring Named Ezzie'

Great so far - can't wait for more!

Fuck ya! Great story! Please continue :-)

I agree. Amazing story. Please continue

One of the very best I've read. Rock on.

Great stuff! Looking forward to the next story!

I cannot help but agree with these comments. This is by far you of the best stories I've read on here. If you don't continue thos story especially with the length of it, I will be one very disappointed reader.

Great story so far. Well worth the read. Can't wait for the next part. PLEASE CONTINUE!!,

Awesome story. It was little long, but never boring. Keep up great work!

Great story. Look forward to the next installment.

I really like this and where it's going. Can't wait for the next segment!

Great story deff keep going

In part two you asked for feedback about story length. My two cents is it depends. It is really about how frequently you sprinkle in erotica, that is after all the point of this site. If I want to read pages of non-erotic plot and character development I have that on my kindle. My chief complaint about part one is that the eroticism tapers off by page five. I hung in on the entire family lake trip hoping for a payoff.

The writing is good, and the erotic stuff is hot. I would break up your submissions so that they end on a hot note.

I've never been this hooked in a story. Great work!

Wow. So the Mc is so gay. Here you get a magic ring that lets you fuck every girl you want and it makes them want it, and what does Mc do? Complain and unbelieve. I got so annoyed over all the "no way"s and "seriously"s I started imagining the Mc with a surfer voice. Bro is handed the Keys to the castle and he complains and bitches. Suuuuper gay. I couldn't even finish the first page. Mc is annoying af.

Lots of potential here, some of the writing is very good. Way too much focus on Ray and the business contract though. Focus more on the characters that matter.

And what's With the Random capitalization Of Words in This Story?

I like many chapters please continue great story so far

Well written! Love the story and the attitude of the protagonist.

Nice story. It’s almost believable. Needs some grammar and spelling editing though

I absolutely loved this story! I'm a big fantasy fan, second behind erotica (winks), and the magic, combined with the sweetness, tenderness, intimacy and great sex came together just right. so good.

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