All Comments on 'A Room with a View'

by wesleyfonda

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zooliciouszooliciousabout 5 years ago
Neighborly fun

I like the build up. The next parts should be fun.

JoeehartleyJoeehartleyabout 5 years ago
Nice

Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
"The cork popped free"

Yeah, I bet it did.

That story was a corker. Nicely done.

WinstanleyWinstanleyabout 5 years ago
Wait, what?

That abrupt ending was rude!

dougsurreydougsurreyabout 5 years ago

hope theres a 2nd part!

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 5 years ago
as things uncork

should be a great chapter two.

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Hopefully my work will speak for itself. UPDATE 21 Mar 2019: I've just submitted a story called A Room with a View. Hopefully it will be published soon and I would welcome your constructive feedback as always.