All Comments on 'A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 07'

by MrsDeathlynx

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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyalmost 17 years ago
Very nice...

You wove a sweet tale, in the end linking all the chapters together to give us the history on our Muriel and Benedict. I am very glad you decided to write in the Chain and I look forward to seeing this particular relationship between our maid and our "High Excellency" blossom - unless old Bags has somethin' up his sleeve! Thanks again for telling a great story. ~ Red

slyc_willieslyc_williealmost 17 years ago
The beginnings of romance

Though i was privy to an advance copy, I enjoyed reading this again. The effort you made to detail who Muriel and Benedict are is commendable. I anticipate the relationship that develops between these two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Sweetest chapter yet

Left me really wanting to know what will happen with those two. Hey, I might even lend a hand :)

Maharat

DarkniciadDarkniciadalmost 17 years ago
Ahhh...

So there doth lurk the heart of a man beneath Benedict's iron hard exterior. Well done, you've really brought these two out into three vibrant dimensions.

rosamundirosamundiabout 13 years ago
Wonderfully tender

I wish you would write more here, you are brilliant.

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