All Comments on 'A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 07'

by MrsDeathlynx

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rosamundirosamundiover 13 years ago
Wonderfully tender

I wish you would write more here, you are brilliant.

DarkniciadDarkniciadalmost 17 years ago
Ahhh...

So there doth lurk the heart of a man beneath Benedict's iron hard exterior. Well done, you've really brought these two out into three vibrant dimensions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Sweetest chapter yet

Left me really wanting to know what will happen with those two. Hey, I might even lend a hand :)

Maharat

slyc_willieslyc_williealmost 17 years ago
The beginnings of romance

Though i was privy to an advance copy, I enjoyed reading this again. The effort you made to detail who Muriel and Benedict are is commendable. I anticipate the relationship that develops between these two.

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyalmost 17 years ago
Very nice...

You wove a sweet tale, in the end linking all the chapters together to give us the history on our Muriel and Benedict. I am very glad you decided to write in the Chain and I look forward to seeing this particular relationship between our maid and our "High Excellency" blossom - unless old Bags has somethin' up his sleeve! Thanks again for telling a great story. ~ Red

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