All Comments on 'A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 16'

With all else going on, it's the less obvious interactions that could prove so important in the end. Am I wrong for enjoying Benny getting a little of the pomp slapped out of him? ~_^ There are two potential sources of shared strength to stand against Bags here. The question is whether they'll overcome the obstacles, real and self-created, that stand in the way of that strength. Excellent chapter.

I really enjoyed this chapter. Thanks so much for joining the chain and establishing your place in it so eloquently. You've created a great story within a story, something I was looking forward to from the beginning. ~ Red

Of at least Benedict and Muriel's relationship. Good development between these two; I keep wanting to wring Benny's neck!