All Comments on 'A Saucy Play Ch. 01: Rachel'

Well written and very enjoyable. Not sure if it would be better to let it stand, as is, or try a sequel. Just don't stop writing!

Perfect build, perfect payoff, perfect length.

Perhaps my favorite story in the nude on stage genre - and I've read them all. I absolutely love the progression: 4 performances with increasing sexiness (similar to the excellent Greek Week). Let's you continue to push the boundaries and builds the anticipation. Also enjoyed the Kyle/Sarah pairing as it added to the taboo. Have seen something similar with the incest category where siblings were pushed into crossing the line "for the sake of the play". Please - you HAVE to do a sequel. Different actresses if needed for fresh personal boundaries, but this formula is gold! Thanks for writing.

And this is only part one? I don't think I can handle parts 2 and 3!

Thank you for the very kind comments, all! I just submitted the next chapter to this story, with others planned. This is a quicker turnaround because I had this one mostly written already. The others may not arrive as quickly. The next chapter also pulls back a little in length and sex, partly in order to set up slower arcs in the future. Hope you enjoy!

Very good, a long, well paced sexy story x

Your pleasant style and engaging storytelling made this story all the more erotic. I appreciated the light touch on the love-making, and your flair for drama kept me clicking through for the whole tale. Keep writing!

This is definitely a great exhibitionist story, well structured, well written. Top Notch.