All Comments on 'A Secret Attraction'

by Not2Pervy

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AmbulAmbulabout 2 months ago

“How long does it take to house train a puppy? The key is repetition.”

Fabulous last line. This was a wonderful story. A continuation would be another fun read, but not necessary.

goodshoes2goodshoes2about 2 months ago

This is the type of story that deserves to have parts 2, 3, and possibly more added to it. 5 stars +++++.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Very hot! Needs another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Look forward to Ch. 2

PeperePepereabout 2 months ago

I couldn't give it a 5 because the 'coaching' and talk was too juvenile.

MalesubdkMalesubdkabout 2 months ago

I hope this story gets another chapter.

Do they only fall in lust or do they fall in love? How about Tyler when he founds out?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Trusting, Secret Attraction 2 is in the works and Ryan taking charge of Mrs. V.

mytimetobehappymytimetobehappyabout 2 months ago

love this, hope theres more coming

LimeyracerLimeyracerabout 2 months ago

A great read! Every young man's fantasy... and some old farts too!! Well Done. Definitely follow up with a #2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

absolutely outstanding!!

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

I love the lead up to the eventual sex. You didn't mention breeding her and a baby later. Hope so anyway. Lets have a couple of chapters more and see where this goes. There's definitely love between them here. My first marriage was with a woman twice my age.

AnonymousAnonymous21 days ago

Beautiful stunning sexy story,

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Playing at being a writer; blending my experiences, fantasies, people I've known, and people I wish I'd known, and creating something new. If it didn't happen, I try to at least make it possible to believe it could have, somewhere, to someone, past, present, or future. I'll ke...