All Comments on 'A Secret Life Ch. 04'

The rating scale, only to 100, doesn't do this segment to your story any justice, it should go up to 200 at the very least. Seriously though, I can honestly say that this has been the most sensually erotic piece that I have ever read on literotica to date. You have written this chapter in a way that captures the reader's attention, instantly drawing one in with a stimulating flow that's consistant and persice, leaving the reader inthralled for what's to come. (no pun intended) Very, very, well done.

~EnchantedGreen~

I LOVE UR FRIST (3CH'S) BUT THAN U CHANG UR WONDERFULSTAYL ((WHY??)) I LOVED UR UNIQUE STAYL IN ((CHANGING LIFE))&((NEW LIFE)) BUT THIS SO FAR TO WELL DONE AS THEMSOWRY MAN BUT CUZ' I LOVE WHAT U WROTE & WANT THE BEST FROM CUZ' I CAR .NEWSTART

Well written, of course -- this author always has style. But I hate it: every selfish attitude, every animalistic feeling, every perverted act. Simply no!

I don't often like d/s scenes, but this one was *really* arousing.

Your best yet!

That. Was. Sexy. <3 Love!!!!!!!!!!!

Bit of a kink are you?? LMAO!!!! Loved it...

I have to say, as a bit of a submissive myself, that this chapter was very hot! It is not, a a previous poster said, “selfish” to dominate a submissive and give them what they enjoy, if you do it with love and concern for their safety.

This is so sad and disgusting. I refuse to read any further. Your character Dave is the biggest asshole without any other thought ever. He disgusts me, treating the man he is supposed to love like an instant slave. That is being such a jerk. Then blaming everything on Steve. If Steve turned around and punched him into next week, it would be deserved. Dave should be home alone.