by ingarlm
The sex is hot and juicy, but the smell from the preceding chapter still cloys. And it isn't love, despite their protestations: it is vulgar fucking. Ingarim usually writes wonderful romances, but this is not one. It gives new and indecent meanings for "top" and "bottom." The writing style and the very satisfying sex force me to give it a 4, but I am disappointed.
i loved this story and all your others. its a total affirmation and reminder that love comes in many guises- and not all of them are sugar coated and taste like vanilla. sex as a physical expression of the emotions between people is as varied as the participants and i personally admire those authors and stories which represent that...
Love comes in many, many forms. Top, bottom, dominant, submissive, good old plain vanilla, or something a little more wild. I loved this story. It was a refreshing change and highlighted the fact that in a healthy loving relationship boundries can be explored and pushed. It was seriously hot! Screw the people who can't handle it - if you don't like it, don't read it!
And so this wonderful romance wraps the hot sex and soulful affection into a gentle conclusion -- winding down into smiles of satiety, like any pair of lovers after super lovemaking drifting off to sleep in each other's arms. Rating: five stars and a whole bunch of oakleaf (or figleaf) clusters. THANK YOU!!
sounds almost like a true story. I enjoyed reading it and must say, one of the better gay stories on this site
This is such an awesome series I like to revisit it often. I'd love to see how their doing, and if they ended up married together.
So what if some of their sex is a bit kinky. If they both enjoy it, what's wrong with that ? And it's not as if they don't make love other ways as well. I certainly would have like more detailed descriptions of the hot sex between them in this chapter, but I suppose it's also good to leave something to the imagination. Even if I think you can write it better than I can imagine it !
I must be a pervert? Since I'm enjoying the series, it just goes to show that every one is different. And that love does eventually come. Sex is just a part of it.