All Comments on 'A September Honeymoon'

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charlottepalisadecharlottepalisadeover 8 years ago
Great Job!

Hoping for another chapter soon!

blackgblackgover 9 years ago
Oregon hottubs

You have the lovly Cindy, Tom, Murry and Bill in an adventur to die for!!!!!

Csnt wait to hear the "next year" part if the storie.

Can you bring in more old men??

Maybe some cab drivers... Truck drivers.

Too good, Gfunk

ManosHandsManosHandsover 10 years ago
Loved it!

Well written - lots of sex. Nice ending - the typical way would have had Cindy doing the guys, but you threw in a curve as well as paving the way for a sequel. Let me know when you publish 'next years' adventure'

ManosHands

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well Written

If you return to this group you will have to explain how this swinging affects their marriages.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Bill and Murray... cant help but think this is a story about the actor.. lol

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