All Comments on 'A Shocking Good Morning'

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Submisky35Submisky355 months ago

This short story could well have been named "A Rude Awakening". Multiple zaps with a cattle prod isn't my idea of fun, loving, BDSM. I can think of many ways to awaken a sub that is bound as Eleanor was that would excite me without being cruel. Then I could go make coffee without a guilty conscious. Well written, though.

clingwrapclingwrap5 months agoAuthor

@Submisky35 thanks for the comment, that's a great title!

ag2023ag20235 months ago

loved it !!, really hot and sexy !!!

ag2023ag20235 months ago

loved it !!! really hot !!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I’m hoping you meant some kind of electronic sex toy type of thing because an actual cattle prod used on a human is a torture device, mind you I doubt that cows are happy to being on the receiving end either.

Tess (uk)

clingwrapclingwrap4 months agoAuthor

Hi Tess, you are correct, I'm very far from a farm boy. Real-life "Ellie" once told me of her desire for something stronger than her wand, and my mind went to a more industrial instrument. Probably a bit too extreme, I doubt she would enjoy it either. Cheers.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

the tension; keep on writing

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