All Comments on 'A Shoulder to Lean On'

That was very hot! I loved it. More?

5 Stars.

Jeez!!! Totally absolutely freekin hot! And good writing too. :-)

I could feel her lying underneath him taking his cock. And I'm a guy.

Most excellent. Almost melodic descriptions.

Good premise.

Sex too automatic.

Needs extended/extensive details.

Dialog is really stilted.

Three stars.

Was really hoping for a good brother/sister story but having her married when they get together ruined it. Never a fan of cheating, swinging, sharing or swapping, no matter who they are. 2*

Don't know why you tagged this story of two siblings cheating on their spouses only with "oral".

There's something that doesn't work with this story (for me), regrettably hard to pinpoint, I think it's something about authenticity. I get this image of a man trying to write cleverly and convey a woman's feelings, that he actually knows too little about.

Five stars, wish it could be more, your work deserves it! Looking at your 'Bio' you don't say whether you're male or female, but I sense a softer, more fulfilling side of intimacy that might be lacking were it from a male writer. Either way, you're very talented, please don't stop writing.

Wonderful. A little confused about the brother having a 'spot.' First time I've heard of this. I can only assume it to be his frenulum. I very much enjoyed your story. Thank you.

Wow, very nice! Love romantic incest stories! 5/5

Good premise.

But rushed.

Needed more preliminaries/foreplay before the blowjob.

Lots of slow, sensuous playing with his cock and balls.

Certainly needs him playing with her tits. Maybe some titty fucking before cock enter her mouth.

While he's staring at her ass, maybe some fingering her asshole.

Four stars.

You did a great job of building a background with hints and references without giving us an info dump like many stories seem to. The buildup of attraction and lust was very well done, and the resulting sex scenes were hot. I concur that the reference of a g spot for him was jarring, but everything else was great. 5*

Enjoyed the build, the will we, wont we questions. An online romance, where one feels more than the other, is more common than we realize. Online, should be all fantasy, but to be good, emotions have to be involved also. This is one way change and unfulfilling sex life.

(4/30/2024) OUTSTANDING!!!