All Comments on 'A Shower Surprise'

Enough said!

Nice premise.

Well paced.

Would have liked some more slow teasing of his cock to extend the tie before he blew his load.

Would have liked a little reciprocity. Perhaps her asking him if he ever thought about her while he masturbated? What did he imagine? Would he like to see her breasts? Feel them? etc.

And frankly, I can't ever imagine being too busy to masturbate. Not a reality.

Nevertheless, five stars.

Thank you! This is actually the first piece of erotic fiction I ever wrote, and while I've wanted to go back and tweak it or add to it, doing so didn't ever feel right.