All Comments on 'A Sibling in Need Pt. 03'

Thank god you decided to continue the story and change direction. Excellent chapter. Keep it coming. Summer and cole need to end up in long term commited relationship together...even have kids

5⭐

Readers need to be patient with stories. Characters will have moments where they think one way is the right direction only to have their heart steer them in another. Long way of saying that, sure I might have them say one thing about future plans but that doesn't mean it will play out in that fashion

I'm open to opinions on where my readers would like to see things head. As this story is currently taking place in July of 2019, I am considering jumping ahead into the heat of the pandemic of 2020 and making it just a sex romp for the siblings. Maybe a baby is brought into the picture. thoughts?

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We are all Cole, or at least we want to be.

love it but i think you need to keep it just them, i see how you set it up but better as their own story.

Brothers and sisters don't share! This turned into TRAILER PARK TRASH

Simple. If you become one of those who think we all share, you are dead wrong. We get very possessive. And yes the phrasing indicates exactly what you think.

Great story so far. Please dont jump ahead, the bedt part of stories is the blossoming of the relationship. And like the others have said, please do not have them start sleepikg with other people, it kind of defeats the whole purpose of a loving "us against the world" type of connection.

Just them and some babies. Get rid of Ashley, kill her off, get her an out-of-state job, and let her get caught in a one-night tryst. This should be just brother and sister. Or, transfer Summer to Paris and have them move there while still keeping their family intact. No more other people.

It was good until Ashley came, she can go fck herself for all I care

Don’t forget to add narcissism and hypocrisy to your tags. Cole displays both. I see a lot of professions of love but in reality mostly lust