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All Comments on 'A Side Trip'

by TxRad

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Jim44444Jim44444over 10 years ago
Interesting

Nice story but it needed a bit of editing for a contest entry. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love the subtle...

... and slowly building weirdness. I was half expecting you to break out the ghouls, werewolves and zombies towards the end but I'm happy that you didn't. This works a lot better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Crazy story, but then, what do you expect for Halloween.

Very descriptive and erotic. Enjoyable read

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Interesting. Half the story was going to a party and the other half was supernatural stuff. Maybe two stories? I liked it but I am not sure at all that I loved it.

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