by eroticbro
definitely need to work on the typos. As for the story, very interesting idea! Looking forward to the next chapters.
The Sims Digital Game Realm is ripe for XXX Rated Adventure.
excellent piece of work - the whole shifting into the sim world is very intriguing but I personally dont think it should be that easy? maybe make it more difficult as time goes on?
love this story, on of the best i think. i think you might start a new wave of sim related storys. the sims is just ripe for the picking. mabey he can go into other games aswell...
I hate to add a negative, but you could use a proofreader just to eliminate the typos.
I'm really surprised this is the first virtual reality story I've stumbled upon so far. I really like where its going so please keep it up.