All Comments on 'A Single Moment Ch. 04'

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ender2k2kender2k2kover 4 years ago
Great story

I hope there isn’t too long a wait for the next chapter. Thanks

timothynoullettimothynoulletover 4 years ago
Awesome story

I love this story and I can’t wait to see what happens next. Please keep going with this

Thank you

AxelottoAxelottoover 4 years ago
Nice.

As an oblivious husband, I sympathize with Mike. He got overwhelmed and had to retreat to coll down. We oblivious types are like that - we feel like everyone else, but we miss some of the unspoken communication that others see.

Axelotto

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great Story

This is a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

2cookies4u2cookies4uover 2 years ago

Absolutely loving this story! Thanks Dreamweaver!

SissyBoy1WarszawaSissyBoy1Warszawaabout 1 year ago

A great story showing that true love, friendship is open and worth the sacrifices. I really like the attitude of the main character Ben, and Rachel and Sery, and now you've added Ben's sister Susan and her husband Mike. Who thanks to Rachel and Sarah rediscover their love and open up to sex.

I think about what will happen next and how the fate of Ben, Rachel, Sara and Susan and Mike will turn out, I am very much looking forward to the next part of this story. SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📝🧒👨‍❤️‍👨👧

Wspaniała historia, przedstawiająca że prawdziwa miłość, przyjaźń jest otwarta i warta poświęceń. Bardzo podoba Mi się postawa głównego bohatera Bena, oraz Rachel i Sery, a teraz dodałeś siostrę Bena, Susan i jej męża Mike'a. Którzy dzięki Rachel i Sarze poznają na nowo swoją miłość i otwierają się do seksu.

Myślę co dalej się wydarzy i jak się potoczą losy Bena, Rachel, Sary oraz Susan i Mike'a, bardzo czekam na kolejną część tej historii. SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 📝🧒👨‍❤️‍👨👧

Timochka69Timochka6911 months ago

This one really needs a new chapter. A great story so far!

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