All Comments on 'A Sissy Maid is Born Ch. 01'

I loved the fact that he wished for what was happening his whole life , and low and behold he got what he had been wishing for and maybe much much more

This is a great start but leaves me wanting much more. I wonder if it would have been better to further develop the story before publishing so little of it. But perhaps the author is teasing us....

great use of language, your discriptions are enchanting.

One of the better written F/m stories on Lit. It was believable and erotic in the play. Just the right balance. Just wish it was longer.

You two can write both M/f and F/m which not everyone can do well. Thank you for the enjoyable tale.

I don't usually enjoy descriptive writing but that really did bring the situation to life. I love all your writing and I'm pleased to see this may be a long and very hot series.

You set the stage and wove your story excellently. Your descriptions brought the barn and the action to life. I can't wait to read Ch. 02. Bravo!