All Comments on 'A Slave in Imperial Rome Pt. 05'

Very nice plot development. I am looking forward to the next installment.

Im really enjoying the plot development. Please dont take too long to post the next installment :)

I thought this story was much more involved in to story building than just acts of sex, until you introduced Lucilla. Suddenly I wanted to read more. Please continue this story further,

What a wonderful story.

However, there may be a history issue. Rome destroyed Carthage in 146 BC. Presumably, Lucilla's slave came out of that action.

The problem is that it wasn't until 6 BC that Rome directly governed Judea. That would make Lucilla's slave to be about 140 years old.

This is a trivial issue, but if you ever publish story, you might want to fix it.

Again, this is an excellent and well written story.

--Tom W

Keep writing this story, it's very good. You're a great writer.

I can't believe I am so into an erotic story. Its brilliant. You're brilliant for writing it. I really like this new twist with lucilla. Hopefully in the future installment we will see more intimate scenes with alonia and Rebekah both, and then perhaps with lucilla and her girl and the two judeans as well.

NO ??? I'll tell you the day after the next installment is posted !!! Great storyline and great character development. Time in Judea promises to be interesting and the return to Rome even more so.

Wonderful story and looking forward to the next part!

What a sexy and interesting story. Can't wait for the next installment.

Cerrotorre is possessed by the spirit of George rr Martin. We might have to wait for a year before the next installment is out.

the story is good.

release the part 2. it's been 2 months

Lost it. Started as slavery, has turned into slush.

marcus is quite a lucky one in case of alonia and lucilla having them in harem although i hate harem as it distracts from the pure romance between 2 persons but you have been a genius at keeping romance and harem working well with each other

but still i hope rebekkah remains no1

Super. I am savoring this great story and much anticipating where it may go. Bravos again.

Wow. Really good!