All Comments on 'A Slave To My Girlfriend Pt. 04'

It's sad and a shame that the author is suffering from these intrusive thoughts. However I do implore sane readers to allow him to work through his issues in this safe space. Without this safety valve he may cause harm to himself or others, so be patient and lets try to reserve judgement.

nothing here to rate! the overall stories has a lot of potential I am not sure if you have the time or energy to develop it. I will wait to see where it leads from here before I judge. Pappasleaze!

Half of the chapter did not upload when this was posted initially. Fixed now - enjoy :)

I've read this entire story and it makes me sad. It's so obvious that he loves Chloe, but it's not so obvious that she loves him. It's the internal dialogue that bothers me. He doesn't like it. Even if she says he does. If he was more loving and thankful in his thoughts I think this would be wonderful. However he doesn't leave her.. hmm. Please don't let Chloe cheat on Daniel. I'd like a happy ending please. It is hot though. Good work. If you can write a story that makes me sad then it must be good work.

amazing story

i like this story so much

i like how mean you make some characters and how you write it

please keep going and thank you for the story

i like it

and kinda hope he does become a cuck

having her cheat on him wouldn't be bad i look forward to what you do next

Awesome story. I love the dynamic between Kiley and Daniel. A suggestion for the future: you could give more detail to Chloe's outfit/underwear, maybe Daniel could walk in on her getting ready to see Myles or something, idk. Great writing overall.

I hope you continue this series, really looking forward to more work from you in the future.

Heat story!!!! Reslly needs more😀😀😀👍👍👍

Seriously she doesn't love him at all. I think Daniel is destined to be with Kiley

Oh man you are teasing us, i cant wait to read how Chloe cheats on Daniel with Miles. She has to make him a cuckold.

for all the people that think this story is good I suggest you seek help

Fantastic story, you are a talented writer. Thank you very much for posting!

Wow awesome story -please continue!! Thanks for sharing your talent and creativity.