All Comments on 'A Slave's Tale Ch. 01'

Keep it going!

Loving it so far... However, for further chapters, I do wish that you would put what SIR is saying in quotations because, otherwise it's hard to understand when SIR begins/ends speaking. On another note, I was hooked immediately as I started reading, and can't wait to see what happens next!

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Eagerly looking forward to the rest!!