by Kantarii
Just letting you know that I am still reading and still think your story is coming along nicely. I do have a few things I want to say but I will wait to see where the story goes because my opinions could change once I've read more, as the characters develop more. Looking forward to the next installment.
First, you are a fine writer. It's a pleasure reading your fluent, fluid prose, & your characcters are unique & fascinating. I'm really intrigued to see what you do with the bi-curious girlfriend. I'm hooked on this series. Thid has been an arousing, enlightening read for me as a woman & lesbian.
I loved this chapter. It's your dialog with yourself that always touches me, whether it's purely sexual or emotional. This is such a combination of everything I hold dear..... your garments...."silver and black lace satin nightgown".....your self pleasuring....."My knees are trembling and shaking; my vision is blurry. Panting with short, shallow breaths, I gaze into the bathroom mirror as I feverishly stroke my cock, anticipating my climax.".....reading this all is so genuine, so arousing.....one of may favorite chapters.....