by RobertWilsonWriting
My 2 cents
Too short! But I still gave it 5 stars. You continue to keep me interested. I enjoy the flow of the story and the characters. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Best story I've read in a long time on Literotica. Keep up the great work!
So far, this is a very fun story, and I mean fun as high praise. So many writers take themselves too seriously, and others go past silly into eye-rolling cringe, but thus far this has hit the happy zone quite nicely. I especially like the line "I'm very happy with my non-genocidal ancient AI friend"; couldn't we all use more non-genocidal friends?
Good start to the story with engaging characters. Keep up the good work.
Longer chapters would be better, but that is for you to decide.
Not many people start with 4.8’s
Your story line, style, grammar is superb!
Looking forward to being a new fan!
wow, though some superficial resemblance to three square meals but the tone and writing is very different. kind of like sexy starship troopers in space with a dash of star wars space opera