All Comments on 'A Soldier For All Seasons Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

My 2 cents

Too short! But I still gave it 5 stars. You continue to keep me interested. I enjoy the flow of the story and the characters. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

My only wish is longer chapters. Outstanding!!!

Mack50Mack50almost 2 years ago

You are doing a great job! Keep at it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Best story I've read in a long time on Literotica. Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So far, this is a very fun story, and I mean fun as high praise. So many writers take themselves too seriously, and others go past silly into eye-rolling cringe, but thus far this has hit the happy zone quite nicely. I especially like the line "I'm very happy with my non-genocidal ancient AI friend"; couldn't we all use more non-genocidal friends?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

more please

Edhawk64Edhawk64almost 2 years ago

Good start to the story with engaging characters. Keep up the good work.

Longer chapters would be better, but that is for you to decide.

Mike9947Mike9947almost 2 years ago

Not many people start with 4.8’s

Your story line, style, grammar is superb!

Looking forward to being a new fan!

WatugiveswatugetWatugiveswatugetalmost 2 years ago

Great story, good pace and well written - really enjoying it!

SildaniSildanialmost 2 years ago

Great story! Looking forward to more sex play with Ana!

bhojobhojoalmost 2 years ago

wow, though some superficial resemblance to three square meals but the tone and writing is very different. kind of like sexy starship troopers in space with a dash of star wars space opera

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Excellent job! Enjoying it immensely!

pk2curiouspk2curiousalmost 2 years ago

More good humor than most . Really well done .

Ultimoter69Ultimoter69over 1 year ago

Great story on to the next chapter

kindzazakindzazaover 1 year ago

The bugs look like people dressed in bug costumes.

ranec1ranec12 months ago

Mean As!!

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Please see my Patreon page for current progress on A Soldier For All Seasons (Chapter 12 now available) and even more stories. https://www.patreon.com/robwilsonwriting Welcome -- I'm an old school sci-fi author getting back in the game. I like the classic space opera books,...