by RobertWilsonWriting
I am so loving this story. Just the right mix of action time, sexy time and great world building. Keep it coming. Could use a bit more proofreading and editing but otherwise great work.
This is great - a space opera like setting with the rugged soldier getting the hot princess… some nice turns and well written, too. Looking forward to the next chapters. Thank you!
My 2 cents
7 stars! lol Excellent story. I look forward to each installment. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Ray guns, a beautiful, mostly naked (but intrepid and resourceful) alien princess, bugs for bad guys, spaceships, military hero, a hike through the jungle, hair's breadth escapes: Edgar R. Burroughs is smiling down on you, my boy! Space opera lives on!
BTW, you don't live in Concord, do you? Just a guess.
Enjoyable "space opera" story. Reminding the serials of old. Looking to the forthcoming episodes.
Brilliant, can hardly wait for more to read hopefully there will be lots more.
Haven’t had a new sci-fi series this fun and promising in awhile. I can’t wait for more!
Great story, I love the action and storyline, please keep posting this when you can!
Great writing, good twist on the space opera theme. I see influences of TSM in the BJ scenes, but that’s a good thing!