by annag98
Welcome back, Anna, good to see some writing from you. I liked the story but I did feel you could have made a bit more out of it. Still, you're back in the fold so all being well we'll soon be seeing more of your work (I hope). Five stars to be going on with.
Short but very sweet. Millie would be welcome to visit me any time she wanted.
This story makes me want to sleep in that bedroom overnight haha abosolutely love this story
This is a story that can go a long way and I'm hoping to read a lot more of it. Anna manages to make her scene so vivid and real. I always feel as if I'm there in her stories as I read them :)
I just loved it as I do all of Anna's writing. She gets right inside me with her storylines and narrative.
This could be the beginning of a series with Millie. how she started where it goes from here, the daughters she loves and the mothers. For a spectre time does not matter,
Agree that this nice little story was abruptly ended. A bit more interaction with Millie would have been nice.
Short, sweet and ooooh so much fun. Of course we want more, but that is part of the fun. Story is perfect as it is.
I usually have much difficulty suspending disbelief in the supernatural. This delightful tale made it easy and worthwhile.
Thank you :)
Mxxxxx
Wonderfully erotic piece. Can easily imagine more scenes with Millie; after all, the place and context are set, but this scene easily stands alone as reading enjoyment. Like essentially all of your work — 5 stars and wishing for more from your vivid imagination.
Short and sweet and to the point. I loved it. I hope we get to see her again.
Such a sweet story. I look forward to reading many of your other pieces. So many of these supernatural stories are just not something I can feel or are not erotic because they are working the Halloween side too hard for me. This is a great story that makes me think it is plausible and erotic. Nice job.
What delightfully bewitching story this is! You definitely cast a spell with this one!
Love from Vero (portia98)
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I never would questioning a ghost or ghostly actions ...... Never seen one, but was part of a seance and truly strange things happens ...... I just would advice " never let a man sleep in this room, the outcome might be different " ;)
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