All Comments on 'A Steamy Summer Night Ch. 01'

You write very well and I felt sucked into the story and characters (no pun intended). Can't wait to read more adventures.

I should be so lucky as to have been Tom! True story, huh? I hope so! It deserves more than a 5.

So far so good. Macy sounds like fun. I think I'd change my name from Agoodman to Aluckyman to have a hot wife, such as Macy.

At least you got fucked, thats better than just watching I guess.

I felt like I was actually there watching through your eyes. You set the stage perfectly, making it feel very real. HOT story.

An ass kissing contest??

I still love this story. It was such a rush.

Husband watching a hard cock is gay.

Nuf said!

Beautiful and sensually written!

This was a wonderful story and portrayed the couple in a good way. Sexy, adventurous and loving.

Getting someone to proofread would help with the few typos but great story

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