All Comments on 'A Steep Price to Pay'
by Grey Eagle 286
- 18 Comments
sherlock40over 18 years agoHe would never believe the woman he loves and cherishes over what some stranger showed him on a DVD. So, instead of telling the one person that could fix everything, she submits to the asshole over and over again. Wow, what a great wife! To keep having sex over and over with strangers to keep her husband from becoming upset.
Anonymousover 18 years agoThe last paragraph salvaged an otherwise "you have got to be kidding" story. Nice touch.
-- KVK
Nightowl22over 18 years agoRight, a very good recovery there. Something along that line should be given EVERY rapist.
Good storu!
txrosenaynayover 18 years agoas always enjoyed the story...get it..."STORY" people...i am not a writer just a reader who enjoys this FREE website and thankful for writers who give of their time and talents to allow us to read their works...yes, some are better than others...some are so good you wonder why aren't these people in the big publishers office making millions? Some people just enjoy writing for themselves and others and although they do submit things here to learn from other authors who may point out a few things here and there...man...give this guy a break...or read someone else. However, you have my vote Grey and i do thank you for allowing us to read your stories...respectfully a fan in Texas naynay
Anonymousabout 15 years agoshe knew about rohypnol so she would have told hubby.Pistolpackinpete
EspressoBolusover 13 years agoThe last paragraph of the story actually dimished the story. Offer little details indicating the alternative explanation slong the way, not as a thyrowaway "this is what really happened" at the end.
Anonymousover 10 years agoShe waited months to tell the rapist she would go to the cops when she should have done that immediately. DIVORCE the stupid whore.
kjohns2001over 9 years agoJustice sometimes comes with the actions of the legal system, but sometimes the only way to get justice is to handle it yourself, or with the help of others. In this case justice was delivered by the husband. Is it possible that this story could happen in real life? Yes. But, that said, the story did not go far enough, the other men were not dealt with within the story, they should have been. Of course the story highlights a common theme found in stories of this kind, that being that wives should trust their husbands enough to tell them immediately if something happens. I agree that they should even if only a few husbands would deal with the situation themselves. In real life a drug test, and a rape kit, would provide evidence enough to get the men involved arrested and charged and most likely convicted. Afterwards of course would come the living with a sex offender tag following them through life.
The main point of the story is honesty pays, along with trust in your spouse. A very good point to make for either a wife or a husband.
Oldmantruckerabout 2 years agoIt took a Month to tell her husband? And then Only after he caught her out with her blackmailer. Sorry but I'd be willing to get her out of the blackmail but I'd have to think real hard bout staying with her. Plus she's going to need extensive counciling as well. Basically she's been repeatedly raped. That Will cause major mental problems for Any woman. U
mfbridges3 months agoSounds a little fishy. Doesn't mention anything till caught. When he sees' her she's holding his arm, why would she be doing that. She could have lied about all that. You know she was with someone, so that first story she tells you without anything to back it up you believe. 50-50 chance.
