by fledgling
I found this story to be unique and downright captivating. I COULD NOT stop until I had read the whole thing. I look forward to reading more of this story!!!!!!
Hi.. Any chances of you carrying on with this story? I found it cleverly written and a captivating story. It surely was left in a cliffhanger and i surely am dissappointed if its not continued... Best of luck.
Asmokki
This is a great story, might not be as sexual at a lot of others on this site. But really, your story was so much better than what usually ends up reading.
I thinks it's an awesome story, that I hope you at some point would pick up again, cause really this isn't an ending..
This is it?????????????????
the ending sucks if it is the ending, maybe you just stopped like so many other writers