All Comments on 'A Story of Mexico Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Not bad

I quite like your story just that I don't understand too what is all the fuss about when Vanessa only met Johnny only the day before and she acted like he was her possession just because an 'old friend' shoved her breasts into his face.

Come on, why make all woman the jealous type especially they are not even in a relationship. Please don't make women throw themselves at men. Not all man like this type of woman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Pesos

You realise 20 pesos is like $2USD? The plot is bad enough without the added ignorance that Mexico is piss cheap and you could get a beautifully crafted scarf for $1.10. Get real! Have you even been there?

HorniBunniHorniBunniabout 14 years ago
Love it

I enjoy this story please update soon, but omg Vanessa is acting a bit like a psycho, Johnny isnt even hers lol, but i love it

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