All Comments on 'A Strange 25th Ch. 01'

Looking forward to part two. Part one left too many things unclear. Who is the one with the ability. If it is her, why is he so understanding of what is happening?

Love it! Usually the one with the mind powers is the dominant, but this adds a sexy twist that makes it more interesting.

Could use an editor to look it over...but otherwise a good, steamy story. Looking forward to ch.2