All Comments on 'A Strange Compulsion Ch. 07'

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Nice premise but I fell this is poorly written. The conversations are juvenile and lack depth.

Your section breaks are also a bit much and over-stylized. Try three dashes ---. That should suffice and not be so jarring on the eyes.

Starting to become dull and routine at this point. Usually it's now that unimaginative hacks toss in anal or worse to try spicing it up. Please don't. Just go back to the earlier chapters and go with that vibe.