All Comments on 'A Stroll in the Park'

I liked it. It sounds like it really happened.

Lovely and very erotic - done the same myself

Thanks anonymous. I did my best to capture a feeling of attraction between the characters.

Very, very nice. The courage to kiss in public, the heat of those moments overcoming what others who saw it were thinking. Kiss your lover, why not? You suck his cock, that's the least you could do for him. The sexual hunger between you two was riveting. Some emotion mixed with cock lust goes a long way in a gay story.

Great job man!