All Comments on 'A Stroll through the Park'

This was both silly and bad.

Loved it!! I got sucked into the story till the end. It gave me goosebumps. Nice work.

This story is great. Absolutely throbbing right now. Please write more. I could imagine every little bit of detail.

I'm saving this for the future. DJ

Well written and exciting. :) I can't wait for more.

...in the sexy kind of way. I appreciate the way you laid out their relationship; both the love and the dominance. I also appreciate that she's not some 20 year old girl with a 30 year old guy but an older couple which runs against the typical grain here. Nice job and please add more work!

-Silver

I love the dynamic of the relationship...well-written! Thank you!

Very well written... More please!!!!