by merf68
instead of all the © blabla next time please add bi warning.. ruined it for me
This is hot stuff. Amazing. I'm not usually into bi or spanking but it didn't bother me this time. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Mmmmm seriously hot stuff which hits all my buttons - cant wait for more :)
Not as impressive as Chapter 1 (less sexual tension & build up, shorter & poor ending) but still well above average and another very enjoyable read. Wendy is a wonderful character and I liked the addition of Sandy although felt she was somewhat underused (plenty of scope for further involvement in Chapter 3 though). As for Mike, I actually didn't mind the cock-sucking but the kissing killed that scene for me and was a big turn off. Looking forward to reading your other stories & keeping fingers crossed for a Chapter 3...
Thank you very much, merf68, for an engrossing tale (?tail?). This is well written, and contained within another entrancing story. It would be theoretically possible to write this without the sexual content. Possible but just a tad boring. However, you cover the erotic content very well - could you get Sandy involved as well, a submissive little slut. But I found it easy and rewarding to identify with all your characters.
I’m a bit of a grammar/spelling maven, so just two points. A woman’s bow is a curtsy, not a courtesy. One “returns the compliment”, not “the complement”. Just so you know, not trying to be critical.
And, of course, we’ll worth five stars - more if they were available.
It's a shame that you never continued with this story. There could have been a LOT more that could have been explored, and I'm pretty sure all of it would have been pretty hot. So far you have hit on both of my kink curiosities (though the male/male kissing isn't really my thing), I would have loved to see this continue, but looks like its done.