All Comments on 'A Student's Brainwashing Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It was a pretty good story until this chapter… 1*

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow, didn't expect that. I like mind control stories, but I always hope for a good ending. This one is too dark for me :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I think you should make them into pregnant obedient mindless slaves. Have them get pregnant again, and again, and again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i loved this, keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved it too, hoping it’s not the end!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Master’s

Apology made me tear up I’m not gonna lie. This story is riveting

zena99zena99over 2 years ago

5 stars. Enjoyed it.

ErikaLErikaLover 2 years ago

I find the story erotic, but ending is very dark. I know we read 50 shades of Grey, but the idea of losing who you are and your memories good or bad is scary. Fortunately there is still a chance of a redemption ark. Hanna's Master was missing. Maybe he could arrange the spirals to undo everything, and the girls could wake up and report to the police with the help of their Master while not revealing who the Master is?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I actually REALLY liked the sinister tone of this story. This platform has a lot of loving stories with pretty endings but I actually love this kind of dark content, as a relatively normal boy I have a real life relationship with a girl I love verry much, and I show her or the love and cuddles.... The loving aspect of sex if you will.... But sometimes I want extreme things, sometimes my fantasies long for something dark and evil and those are the moments when I get here. So let us share our most perverted and evil fantasies here so we can so our partners our most virtues sides. Win win. I really liked wat you did in this story with the pervertion and addiction. I really liked the idea of the spirals and the vr headset. There are more stories of girls destroying themself on this platform but non of them felt as hot as this one, you really took us through a journey where we can see I girl who has her shit together transform into a addicted freak who is being transformed against her Wil into a objectified toy for her master to destroy and reforged into whatever twisted thing he had in mind, I liked how, instead of destroying her, he made her destroy herself and her best friend. Don't let cynical comments influence your cruel type of writing, there are enough people who write wholesome stories. I came here for a evil story of a girl who let herself be consumed by lust until there was nothing left of her, and I found it CRAZY hot. I REALLY hope I can expect more of these evil stories from you, you really made my day. (Ps I really liked the cocktail dress and bdsm equipment parts, maybe you can later expand on those things).

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This story has always conflicted me haha, read it when you were publishing It, and in one side, i loveddd The alternative ending, cute and wholesome and all Happy and kinda a redemption arc for master, buttt in The other side, this ending here made me feel something soo Deep The first time i read It, like It was one of The most intense masturbation sessions i have had reading this when It came out, all in all, i love The story in general, and i also wish i was a student getting brainwashed lol

voidgolemvoidgolem3 months ago

One of the best erotic hypnosis/brainwashing stories I've ever read!

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