All Comments on 'A Student's Horny Transformation'

Interesting premise and nice start. Your pacing and rush to the end need work. More pushback and resistance, slower build, and less of Liam being a complete asshole would have made this story better IMO.

@Anonymous

Thanks for the feedback. I agree about the pacing. This one I intended to keep short and crisp, but I plan on making future stories more developed and more dynamic.

@Whackdoodle

Oh yeah, it gets zany relatively quickly. Part of the package. :)

@Everyone

Thank you all for your likes, subs and views. Hope you enjoyed!

I might have liked her to resist a little more and then maybe play up the humiliation a little more, but generally great!