Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'A Subway Ride'

by drpants54

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 2 Comments
AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

'You' Perspektive is awful and ostracises most of the readers.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Writing in the second person and in the present tense, is difficult to bring off successfully, but you’ve managed it. I wouldn’t try it again, but the story works, and was an enjoyable read.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
userdrpants54@drpants54
6 Works
4 Followers
Learned about the site from a friend and decided this would a be a place I could enjoy turning people on with what's in my head. Thanks for your readership!