All Comments on 'A Summer in the Flesh Ch. 09'

You just keep rolling up the 5’s. Another very hot chapter. The only negative comment I have is your use of the word “twat.” It just feels wrong. It grates against my ears. It feels exactly like the word arse. These two terms appear to be used by British writers and are so foreign to the ear. They totally derail the built up feelings that were previously generated. Please stop using that word. Still worthy of a 5, and lots of smiles. 😊😊😊😊😊