All Comments on 'A Summer on the Road Pt. 04'

Pretty please!

These just aren't long enough 😫

I just start getting into them and they finish!!!

Could Paul and Jane become a real couple and consider dating and marriage? Vera seems to think so, and Paul's children seem to like Jane. And God knows they fit together fine! Give sexy Paul a bit of chest hair for his manly and muscular chest. I am really rooting for them to be together!

Looking forward to the next chapter, soon I hope.

This is a cute tale and you have a story to tell. You will improve with practice and you'll get a different slant on people and events but please keep on writing. You're building up to some sexual tension

but there is a lot more he can teach her.

Have really been enjoying each chapter!!!!

Yeah, ok, this is erotica. But I am disappointed that he couldn’t keep his promise.

Going well, all as expected so far.

you don't waste time...on to part 5 as requested

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